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  6. In an embrace of memories

    in Slideshows & AV Shows

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    Thought it was an excellent presentation of the history of your club. It is a little long for general audiences, but that is not your intended audience so it is OK.

    A nice mix of transition effects, well handled.

    Since you asked for feedback, a couple of things:

    - I found the opening title difficult to read, I recognize Italian is not my first language, but I think more contrast between the title and the back ground would be better. Maybe a bolder font, with a heavier stroke?

    - the finish of the transitions from 1:50-2:29 is a cut, not a fade. I found that to be jarring/disturbing. Perhaps it could be faded out over a second or so?

    -The "pocket watch" was very well done. Great work! It would be even better if the hand holding it were in focus.

    - I found the part after Covid to be confusing and not clear. I think you were showing the effects/disruptions of Covid, but I couldn't make any of the pictures out and quickly lost interest/became confused,

    Overall a nicely produced, well handled AV show with nice music. 

     

  9. Russian Winter

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    Very nicely done, images and music well chosen and synchronized. I'd love to visit, but perhaps not live there. We have enough snow and winter where we are thanks.

    Очень красиво сделано, изображения и музыка хорошо подобраны и синхронизированы. Я бы с удовольствием приехал сюда, но, возможно, не живу там. У нас достаточно снега и зимы, за что нам спасибо.

  22. Family History [Resolved]

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    I doubt if it is what you have in mind as it is not a "template", or "style", but about 15-16 years ago (With a very early version of PTE)  I did a Family Tree set  (106) of PTE AV's that connected with each other via Objects. I gave CD copies to all, but no one in the family bothered to look at it, so I ended up publishing a book of it.

    The individual images/pages were done in PhotoShop.

    I've attached a four sample images/pages. (also in the AVs/book were letters, newspaper stories, pictures of heirlooms etc.)

    The full book  can be seen at: https://www.blurb.ca/books/9680792-robertson-family-tree

    It obviously was too complex a presentation to upload to the web in SLIDESHOW.

     

    04_01 1795_1886 updated.jpg

    05 Alan Gena updated.jpg

    06_01 Douglas updated.jpg

    06_03 Douglas Dee updated 2019.jpg

    15_02 Mary Doug updated 2019.jpg

  23. Arizona Wildfire

    in Slideshows & AV Shows

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    Scary situation for sure. Your production would certainly get the story across on FB.

    I can't answer your embeding question, but I have a suggestion for future productions. 

    I had difficulty reading the text during the playing, I had to stop the video to read it. Perhaps a less "fancy" script or plainer font and use a more contrasting colour might help.

  25. Children's metric. Photo album

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    Aleina:

    You put a lot of work into that book! Congratulations on the result.

    Somethings that could be done differently (Obviously this is subjective, no problems with the way it is now):

    - Your animal gifs(?) and other clip art have a lot of action to them, so much so that I found myself being distracted by them. Perhaps a little less bounce??

    - This is really picky and likely should be ignored, but if one looks at the book as the pages are being turned, there is no progress being made. The left side is always one page thick, the right side is several pages thick. Is there a way to add thickness to the left and subtract thickness on the right?  As I say, this is extremely picky.

    Congratulations again, well done

     

     

     

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