lenscapp Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 Hi.This is my first attempt at a show using PTE. Looking at many of the shows already on the website I have a long way to go. Comments, good or bad would be welcome.Barryhttp://www.mediafire.com/?znz3qegemmz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lloegyr Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Hi BarryWelcome to PTE. As a quick first comment I would say excellent photography and nice to see true verticals, well done. At the moment there is a discussion going on about transitions fro horizontal to vertical shots in a show, some agree, most dont but yours was an effective attempt which would have been stronger if the fade in had been 2 verticals which then faded in and out. Likewsie with the final transition back to horizontal. Also I found the music change a bit jarring and did not quite match up with the images. Welcome show which we be kept, hope to see more.Mike L DaviesMersea Island Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trailertrash Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Hi Barry and welcome. Well done on your first show here. I particularly liked the beach shots with the old abandoned items. Beaches can be interesting places at times.Others more proficient than I wll comment on the finer points for you, the best advice I can give is listen to that advice and use it.These guys are the best there is at this.Andrew Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lakelandlass Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Hi BarryWelcome to PTE. As a quick first comment I would say excellent photography and nice to see true verticals, well done. At the moment there is a discussion going on about transitions fro horizontal to vertical shots in a show, some agree, most dont but yours was an effective attempt which would have been stronger if the fade in had been 2 verticals which then faded in and out. Likewsie with the final transition back to horizontal. Also I found the music change a bit jarring and did not quite match up with the images. Welcome show which we be kept, hope to see more.Mike L DaviesMersea IslandHi BarryI would echo Mike Davies' comments regarding the second piece of music you chose. Also, and I must stress that this is only MY opinion albeit everso humble, the use of borders is very subjective. Some workers dislike them but I always use them - just a very thin 2 pixel line, in a very light grey. It is considered that a WHITE line tends to distract the eye from the photograph and I think your pics are strong enough not to need the border you have used. Keep the a/vs coming Barry. Nice to see someone else contributing.Maureen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul T Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Hi Barry Very nice show and thought the music went well with the images. I did recognise most of the places Flatford, Aldeburgh, Orford, Saxstead, Woodbridge, Lavenham, Southwold and Dedham I think plus many others. I also live in Suffolk and it was nice to see a show from the area I live in. Look forward to your next show.Regards Paul Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Almark Posted March 6, 2010 Report Share Posted March 6, 2010 Hi Barry,good to see you posting here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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