Good morning RayArt, I have played through your show a couple of times and I much enjoyed it.
You have bravely asked for comments and suggestions– so here goes!
As I said it is an enjoyable show but it leaves me wanting more information (but that's just me.) I would like to know the location of these structures, especially the Gaudy-like church.
Animations: At 2:20 you have brought some portrait-format images over a background image, which works well. However, they come to a sudden stop, which is a bit jarring. As they enter from off-screen it might be better to set the animation speed modifier to "Slow down." Likewise for similar animations at 3:25.
There is a strange fade form one slide to a very similar one at about 3:03/5 which is confusing and does not add anything to the flow.
You have made good use of masks at the 3:56 to 4:05 point.
Finally, for now, congratulations on your first show. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Kind regards, Ian McIntosh