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  1. Well done Bert. Certainly is an interesting temple.
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    Well done (however you did it
  3. That link worked. When I clicked on the one in the original post it seemed to pick up the entire string Thanks
  4. Great animation, smoothly done. Music was well chosen
  5. Thought it was an excellent presentation of the history of your club. It is a little long for general audiences, but that is not your intended audience so it is OK. A nice mix of transition effects, well handled. Since you asked for feedback, a couple of things: - I found the opening title difficult to read, I recognize Italian is not my first language, but I think more contrast between the title and the back ground would be better. Maybe a bolder font, with a heavier stroke? - the finish of the transitions from 1:50-2:29 is a cut, not a fade. I found that to be jarring/disturbing. Perhaps it could be faded out over a second or so? -The "pocket watch" was very well done. Great work! It would be even better if the hand holding it were in focus. - I found the part after Covid to be confusing and not clear. I think you were showing the effects/disruptions of Covid, but I couldn't make any of the pictures out and quickly lost interest/became confused, Overall a nicely produced, well handled AV show with nice music.
  6. Very nice decorations, nicely photographed and set to music. Special effects were great
  7. Very nicely done, images and music well chosen and synchronized. I'd love to visit, but perhaps not live there. We have enough snow and winter where we are thanks. Очень красиво сделано, изображения и музыка хорошо подобраны и синхронизированы. Я бы с удовольствием приехал сюда, но, возможно, не живу там. У нас достаточно снега и зимы, за что нам спасибо.
  8. Nice visual story with great sequencing and transitions. Haven't done that trip yet, did an ocean cruise ship sail of a small part of that. Guess we'll have to wait a year or so before the opportunity comes again.
  9. Nice photography. Lake District in UK? Some very nice transitions
  10. Well done, certainly gets the story across. Nicecatvh with the squirrel jumping and the bird flying!
  11. Beautiful images, lovely production
  12. Must have been a great trek! Can you direct me to Tonton Bruno's tutorial re animated maps please.
  13. Very moving presentation Mark. Music was excellent
  14. Mark I have an Australian friend who is planning a trip to Scotland (once Covid-19 is resolved) They really enjoyed your production. Could you share where, and when (in terms of month) you found the puffins. Also the landscape images, were they from widely dispersed areas, along a particular route? Thanks
  15. Wonderful photography. Haven't been to Scotland for way too many years, may I need to go again!!
  16. I doubt if it is what you have in mind as it is not a "template", or "style", but about 15-16 years ago (With a very early version of PTE) I did a Family Tree set (106) of PTE AV's that connected with each other via Objects. I gave CD copies to all, but no one in the family bothered to look at it, so I ended up publishing a book of it. The individual images/pages were done in PhotoShop. I've attached a four sample images/pages. (also in the AVs/book were letters, newspaper stories, pictures of heirlooms etc.) The full book can be seen at: https://www.blurb.ca/books/9680792-robertson-family-tree It obviously was too complex a presentation to upload to the web in SLIDESHOW.
  17. Scary situation for sure. Your production would certainly get the story across on FB. I can't answer your embeding question, but I have a suggestion for future productions. I had difficulty reading the text during the playing, I had to stop the video to read it. Perhaps a less "fancy" script or plainer font and use a more contrasting colour might help.
  18. Stranger2156/Paul: My comment re adding thickness as the pages turn was made as my being very picky. Your suggestion of opening the book "in the middle" would work quite well
  19. Aleina: You put a lot of work into that book! Congratulations on the result. Somethings that could be done differently (Obviously this is subjective, no problems with the way it is now): - Your animal gifs(?) and other clip art have a lot of action to them, so much so that I found myself being distracted by them. Perhaps a little less bounce?? - This is really picky and likely should be ignored, but if one looks at the book as the pages are being turned, there is no progress being made. The left side is always one page thick, the right side is several pages thick. Is there a way to add thickness to the left and subtract thickness on the right? As I say, this is extremely picky. Congratulations again, well done
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