Hi MUR
Title certainly stands out more. Maybe angle it a bit?
The position of the flowers, particularly the one on the left is much better.
I don't remember, in version one, the plant stem with the flowers standing out as much as it does in version 2. The background is soft and muted, while the stem is sharp. The two don't seem to blend as well as I recall from ver 1.
I like the way the stem twists a little as the buds open.