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Very nice show, wonderful images. A few comments: - The opening title is difficult to read. Needs a more contrasting colour. - It would be nice to have the transitions synch with the music. Not sure it that would work with that music. - The background story on the colourizations would be nice - Exposures on the rusting tractors is inconsistent Very subtle use of Ken Burns effect. Not sure it adds much, but might keep some people more tuned it.

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I haven't done an AV show for a while now, but I still watch as many as I can..... I'm with you re "strange movements". Just because you can doesn't mean you should. By Ken Burns effect I am assuming you are referring to pan/zoom. Personally when I watch an AV I prefer no pan/zooming but I fully agree with it when you want the viewer to get an overall look and then zoom into an important aspect of an image. Using the Ken Burns effect on every picture make no sense to me (But I know many will disagree). Use it to sparingly add variety throughout the presentation If I were doing an presentation on early farming, particularly from glass negatives, I would just use a simple fade transition with no movement. But if there were one or two images that had an important/very interesting aspect to it, then sure use the effect, but use it slowly. That's my thinking anyway (knowing I am perhaps "old school"

well done Barry

Nice memories for you.

Well done production. Had not heard of Gardens of Remembrance before. Very nice idea.

Nicely done, no fancy transitions/effects - just presents the nice images with no distractions - my kind of slideshow

Thanks for volunteering. Nice AV

Bet you were there a long time making images. So many to find.

Very nicely photographed (even the accidental image) and then excellently carried through the production process. It's been a long while since I have done an AV and I see a lot of progress has been made with the software. (I started with PTE 1.0 and then stopped producing at PTE 8.0) Almost makes me want to get back into it!!!!!! Thanks for the two productions

Nicely done Barry! Nice sequencing and transitions. Too many people go the route of "look what I can do Mom!" with all that is available to them. I assume you are creating your own music for your AV's?

Good demo of the power of PTE

Trés bien Dan!! Must have been quite a lot of work as you say digitizing the images. The productions are very well done. Merci

Well done Bert. Certainly is an interesting temple.

Well done (however you did it

That link worked. When I clicked on the one in the original post it seemed to pick up the entire string Thanks

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Great animation, smoothly done. Music was well chosen

Thought it was an excellent presentation of the history of your club. It is a little long for general audiences, but that is not your intended audience so it is OK. A nice mix of transition effects, well handled. Since you asked for feedback, a couple of things: - I found the opening title difficult to read, I recognize Italian is not my first language, but I think more contrast between the title and the back ground would be better. Maybe a bolder font, with a heavier stroke? - the finish of the transitions from 1:50-2:29 is a cut, not a fade. I found that to be jarring/disturbing. Perhaps it could be faded out over a second or so? -The "pocket watch" was very well done. Great work! It would be even better if the hand holding it were in focus. - I found the part after Covid to be confusing and not clear. I think you were showing the effects/disruptions of Covid, but I couldn't make any of the pictures out and quickly lost interest/became confused, Overall a nicely produced, well handled AV show with nice music.

Quite the production !!!!!! Well done

Very nice decorations, nicely photographed and set to music. Special effects were great

Very nicely done, images and music well chosen and synchronized. I'd love to visit, but perhaps not live there. We have enough snow and winter where we are thanks. Очень красиво сделано, изображения и музыка хорошо подобраны и синхронизированы. Я бы с удовольствием приехал сюда, но, возможно, не живу там. У нас достаточно снега и зимы, за что нам спасибо.

Nice visual story with great sequencing and transitions. Haven't done that trip yet, did an ocean cruise ship sail of a small part of that. Guess we'll have to wait a year or so before the opportunity comes again.

Nice photography. Lake District in UK? Some very nice transitions

Well done, certainly gets the story across. Nicecatvh with the squirrel jumping and the bird flying!